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Humans And AI Collaborate To Review College Admission Essays

Ever since AI flooded into the mainstream in late 2022, students, parents, and the counselors who support them have been worried about the inevitable day when parts of the application for admission are being reviewed by machines. That day has arrived at Virginia Tech, but it is not the AI admission apocalypse anticipated among anxious applicants. In fact, the combination of AI and human readers might well lead to better and faster decisions. Following the institution’s announcement last week about the use of AI in essay review, I sat down with Juan Espinoza, the vice provost for enrollment management, to learn more.

The Role of Essays at Virginia Tech

Espinoza explains that “grades and rigor drive the review process as well as major selection,” adding, “I think a lot of people forget our review by major, and that actually one of the heaviest weights in the process is what major you’re applying for.” For example, he says, “someone looking at aerospace engineering is going to have a very different applicant pool than someone looking at music at Virginia Tech.” They are clear about the school’s admission criteria on their website and in their programming for potential applicants.

He emphasizes the importance of the essays in their review process and says that while academics are the “driving factor in the decision, for certain majors, essays bring in an additional lens.” Virginia Tech does not use the traditional personal statement–what is often known as the college essay–from the Common App, instead opting for four short essay responses, each 120 words or fewer. These questions, called the Ut Prosim Profile (Virginia Tech’s motto is Ut Prosim or “That I May Serve”), were designed intentionally to assess an applicant’s match for the institution’s mission and priorities. As application numbers have soared in recent years, Espinoza frequently hears skepticism that they are actually reading the essays. He says, “We really believe in these essays because they’re helping us identify the best students and allow us to make the best decisions.”

Why AI and Why Now?

Virginia Tech is committed to a holistic review process. Twenty years ago, they had around 17,000 applications, and this past year they received over 57,000 (more than a 10% increase from the previous year). Reviewing those applications comprehensively becomes a greater challenge every admission cycle. Espinoza says, “It’s just that with volume and the current setup with two human readers, it’s becoming harder and harder to manage, and it’s slowing down our notification process.” He adds, “One of the biggest pieces of feedback we’re getting is we’re coming too late in our offer letter, and so we’re really hoping to accelerate that by a few weeks.” In recent years, Virginia Tech has been notifying students about their status in late February or early March, and ideally, the admission office would like to send applicants a decision by late January.

Espinoza and his team have done the math on the estimated time it takes to review the nearly 500,000 essays they receive. He says, “If each essay takes about two minutes, that would require close to 16,000 hours of labor or about eight person-years.” If the job of one of those reviewers is assigned to a trained AI tool, then potentially they are saving around 8,000 hours, or the equivalent of four years of a person’s life. The concern that often follows is the job losses when AI is replacing humans, but at Virginia Tech, the second readers on applications are volunteers from the community. Espinoza says, “Each year, we recruit and train a group that typically averages between 200 to 300 volunteers from our faculty and staff.” Imagine if those individuals are freed up to volunteer in other ways within or beyond the campus community.

How It Works

As one might suspect, this is not something that Virginia Tech is jumping into haphazardly. Espinoza emphasizes, “the reason why we’re doing this is that we’ve been tracking and doing this research for three years with our faculty.” He adds, “The AI has been trained on the last few admission cycles to make sure that they are identifying key patterns in the answers to ensure that we’re getting the answer that we’re hoping to see.” He says, “The use of AI is to confirm the decision of a human reader, and it was in the most recent year that researchers were able to finally show that their models and their system are as effective as a real person.”

In the previous system, each essay was reviewed by two trained human readers who both assigned a score from 1 to 12 based on established mission-aligned criteria. If those scores varied by more than four points, a third reader was employed to address the discrepancy. With the new AI second review, the discrepancy threshold has been lowered to two points, further ensuring accuracy in the process. The use of a third reader is not changing at all in the revised system.

Source: www.forbes.com